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Re: Who would like to read
Posted: Sat Apr 20, 2019 3:16 am
by Geist
I like it. Would be a good role for a Jack Nicholson Joker.
Re: Who would like to read
Posted: Sat Apr 20, 2019 3:18 am
by necronomous
Geist wrote: ↑Sat Apr 20, 2019 3:16 am
I like it. Would be a good role for a Jack Nicholson Joker.
I can see him playing the part, but do you think that his Joker was that sadistic?
Re: Who would like to read
Posted: Sat Apr 20, 2019 3:45 am
by Gunzen
necronomous wrote: ↑Sat Apr 20, 2019 3:18 am
Geist wrote: ↑Sat Apr 20, 2019 3:16 am
I like it. Would be a good role for a Jack Nicholson Joker.
I can see him playing the part, but do you think that his Joker was that sadistic?
Fuck Jack Nicholson. Your joker is more like Josh Holloway. He is strong physically. Youthful, sarcastic. Your joker is a young man’s game.
Re: Who would like to read
Posted: Sat Apr 20, 2019 5:06 am
by Geist
necronomous wrote: ↑Sat Apr 20, 2019 3:18 am
Geist wrote: ↑Sat Apr 20, 2019 3:16 am
I like it. Would be a good role for a Jack Nicholson Joker.
I can see him playing the part, but do you think that his Joker was that sadistic?
Reprising Randal McMurphy, sure.
Re: Who would like to read
Posted: Sat Apr 20, 2019 1:34 pm
by Reservoir Dog
necronomous wrote: ↑Sat Apr 20, 2019 3:18 am
Geist wrote: ↑Sat Apr 20, 2019 3:16 am
I like it. Would be a good role for a Jack Nicholson Joker.
I can see him playing the part, but do you think that his Joker was that sadistic?
Your Joker needs to be sadistic but still have a twinkle in his eye.
Matthew McConaughey would be my choice.
Re: Who would like to read
Posted: Sun Apr 28, 2019 12:24 am
by megman
I finally got through this.
As good as it was it had trouble keeping my attention. It read like a monologue and I feel it would have been much better with some character interaction in the dialogue dept.
Overall though, keep at it. Look forward to more.
Re: Who would like to read
Posted: Sun Apr 28, 2019 2:21 am
by necronomous
megman wrote: ↑Sun Apr 28, 2019 12:24 am
I finally got through this.
As good as it was it had trouble keeping my attention. It read like a monologue and I feel it would have been much better with some character interaction in the dialogue dept.
Overall though, keep at it. Look forward to more.
It is a monologue. Batman is tied up. There will be filler in between the monologue, so it's not just that. That's just the main part of the story. But I hope it was good otherwise.
Re: Who would like to read
Posted: Sun Apr 28, 2019 11:10 am
by megman
necronomous wrote: ↑Sun Apr 28, 2019 2:21 am
megman wrote: ↑Sun Apr 28, 2019 12:24 am
I finally got through this.
As good as it was it had trouble keeping my attention. It read like a monologue and I feel it would have been much better with some character interaction in the dialogue dept.
Overall though, keep at it. Look forward to more.
It is a monologue. Batman is tied up. There will be filler in between the monologue, so it's not just that. That's just the main part of the story. But I hope it was good otherwise.
Liked what I read. Just wasn't sure if thew monologue thing was intended or not which is why I mentioned it. Curious to see how it develops.